MakeAStar.com review of
"The June Jar"

Industry Review of The June Jar
Category IRB Review Score

Music:

I really like the music on this track. There's plenty of edge and energy. The chord progression is interesting and the melodies strong. I loved the bridge for taking the listener to a new place. Overall a very engaging track. 7

Lyrics:

The imagery and intensity of the lyric is great. A believable and poetic approach shows a lot of craft and artistry. 7

Arrangement &
Production:

Great use of textures and instrumentation. The acoustic against the computer based programming works wonderfully. All the sounds are recorded well and the mix is clear and focused. 8

Lead Vocal:

The lead vocal has identity and passion. Technically strong and emotionally right on cue. I thought the vocal really connected to the lyric and has that certain something I like to call star quality. 9

Musicianship:

All the parts and performances are tight and thoughtful. I liked the way the parts supported the lead vocal never stepping in it's way. All around excellent musicianship. 8

Originality:

Lots of originality here. There's a nice blending of styles and emotions. Dynamics really give this track a unique feel. Lyrical strength also add to the originality of this recording. 7

Marketability:

I'd say this is a very marketable track. The sheer quality of the recording along with the strength of the material and identifiable lead vocal makes this piece a must listen to for those A&R people looking for their next signing. 9

General Comments:

What can I say I love "The June Jar" I'll bet you see some interest in your music soon, It has all the right ingredients to make it a radio friendly hit. Good luck!! Average Score
7.857